NO TWITCHING ALLOWED

It’s Wednesday, the start of another week of Friday Fictioneers. We are led by Rochelle Wisoff-Fields of Addicted to Purple.  Our assignment is to tell a story of 100 words according to a photo prompt.  Here’s my 100 words of make belief.  My mission here is to have fun and s-t-r-e-t-c-h my imagination and let the words flow.

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Photo Prompt – C. E. Ayr

Samatha’s nose itched like the dickens.  She wanted to twitch it so bad but she had promised Daren.

She could see into her neighbour’s kitchen window.  Her heart ached for Cindy.  Such a nice and hard working girl!  That awful stepmother treated her like shit.

Wait!  She could call up her aunt.  Clara would be glad to help out.  Samatha smiled as she folded her arms across her breast.  With a brisk nod of the head and a blink of the eyes, Aunt Clara stumbled through the kitchen door.

“W-w-what happened?”  She muttered, dazed, hair on end.  “Where am I?”

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The shoe brought up Cinderalla’s slipper and the ball.  I like to believe in good witches.  Thus my story.

About hafong

Hello! My name is (Leung) Hafong alias Lily Leung. You always say the last name first….that is the Chinese way. That is my partner lurking behind me. Since this is my blog, I won’t mention his name. But this is a rather cool picture. You see me and yet you don’t…sort of the way I feel about myself most of my life. So this blog is a self-exploration, an archeology dig of some sort. My tools…..words of a thousand or so at a sitting. I will try for that.
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31 Responses to NO TWITCHING ALLOWED

  1. I LOVED Aunt Clara… Ok, now that makes TWO of us showing our age! he he! Wait, maybe you just saw reruns?? 😀 Maybe I’M the only one who remembers Samantha and Derwood. er I mean Darrin from the original shows! 😉

  2. I didn’t think of Cinderella at all.. but you did a great job here…

    • hafong says:

      Thanks Bjorn! I had intended Aunt Clara coming in missing a shoe. But my fingers got ahead of my brain. It was great fun writing it, the most important thing.

      Lily

  3. Ha! What a fun take on the prompt.

  4. I like good witches too. And the shoe reminded me a bit about Cinderella as well. The nose twitching is from “Bewitched,” am I right?

  5. Dear Lily,

    Poor Aunt Clara. I hope she can help Cindy, but with what i remember she’s liable to end up under a pumpkin in a patch somewhere rather than the prince’s ball. 😉 your story brought back memories for me.

    Shalom,

    Rochelle

  6. micklively says:

    This brought back lots of good memories from my childhood.

  7. ceayr says:

    Hugely entertaining!

  8. Arl's World says:

    Haha! 😉 Loved Bewitched and Aunt Clara.

  9. Dale says:

    Fun stuff. Thanks for the memories!

  10. gahlearner says:

    This is fun, a great cross-over. Makes a lot of sense, too.

  11. mjlstories says:

    Ah that twitchy nose…great memories.

  12. I never really watched Bewitched but I still recognised Samantha and enjoyed this crossover tale.

  13. rogershipp says:

    I thought of the TV show… Bewitched… maybe this was a cousin?

  14. I loved Bewitched and knew the beginning characters as well as the later ones. Cute story based on the series, Lily. Aunt Clara was so funny.. 🙂 — Suzanne

  15. Margaret says:

    Clever weaving together of the two stories. And I’m sure Aunt Clara will come up with a much better rescue plan than pumpkins and mice etc.

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