AND THE BEAT GOES ON

 

It is exactly Frinday and time for Friday Fictioneers.  We gather each week to tell our stories of approximately 100 words inspired by a photo prompt.  We are hosted by Rochelle Wisoff-Fields of Addicted to Purple.  Here’s my 100 words this week.  My story is inspired also by being lost most of my life.  I have no sense of direction.  Sometimes it makes for good stories.  Thank goodness for Google map.

rainy-night

PHOTO PROMPT -© Rochelle Wisoff-Fields

The rain came in torrents, drumming down on the roof.  She could hardly think.  She covered her ears with her hands, lowering her head on the steering wheel.  Thank God she was alone!  There was no witness to her inepitude.

She sat.  There’s no need to rush.  There’s no place to go.  She was lost!  Worse, she couldn’t figured out which button/lever to turn on the wipers.  There was no manual.  She checked.  She couldn’t find the radio either.

She should have checked it all out before she left the rental place.  Should have, could have.  The beat goes on.

23 thoughts on “AND THE BEAT GOES ON

  1. Oh I’ve done that! Got in late at night, got the rental car and drove off. The rain started and I couldn’t figure out how to turn on the wipers. I had to pull over for a bit until it stopped!

    Nice story!

  2. Dear Lily,

    I can relate to her. In fact I’ve been her. Driving a rental car is like being in another woman’s kitchen. Nothing is where it’s supposed to be. Very well done. 😀

    Shalom,

    Rochelle

  3. This is so poignant for me right now. This week I had to use a rental while my car was being repaired. It was a foggy morning when it was delivered and I could barely see out the fogged up windows. Defrost button? Radio was on – loud. Volume control? And when I went to refill it with gas …. I can totally relate to this story.

  4. This brought back memories – newly married, first time in the States, first time in an automatic, wrong side of the road, car twice the width we were used to…Surprised we’re both still alive.
    Fun story!

  5. Poor woman. I don’t know if instruction books are all that good any more. Some have one page in English and one each in what seems to be every other known language on the planet. I think I’d turn the starter and start experimenting. It’s better than just sitting there. Sounds like she’s panicked. Well written, Lily. 😀 — Suzanne

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