THE MEETING

It is Sunday of the new year.  I’m a little late for the ball but what the heck. Better late than not showing up.  So here’s my story for the Friday Fictioneers. We are storytellers of 100 words or so.  We are hosted by Rochelle Wisoff-Fields of Addicted to Purple.  Here’s this week’s photo prompt.

Copyright Jean L. Hays
Copyright Jean L. Hays

She saw the coffee shop as soon as she emerged from the subway station.  It was exactly where he had said.  She stood for a moment then walked to the door.  It was now or never.

She scanned the room quickly.  The faces were all blurry.  Her breath was ragged and her heart thumped.

“Slow down.  Take your time.”  She scolded herself.

“May I help you?”  A waitress came up.

“I’m meeting someone.”

“Do you want to walk through to see?”

“Thank you.  I don’t know what he looks like.  I haven’t met him before.”

The waitress raised her eyebrows.

 

9 responses to “THE MEETING”

  1. rochellewisoff Avatar
    rochellewisoff

    Dear Lily,

    Oh those blind dates. You captured her excitement and apprehension beautifully.

    Shalom and Happy New Year,

    Rochelle

    1. hafong Avatar
      hafong

      Thank you, Rochelle. Happy new year to you, too.

      Lily

  2. patriciaruthsusan Avatar
    patriciaruthsusan

    There are probably more of those kinds of dates with computer dating these days. I’d be nervous also. Well done, Lily. Happy New Year to you and yours. 🙂 — Suzanne

    1. hafong Avatar
      hafong

      Thank you, Suzanne. Happy new year to you, too.

      Lily

  3. mjlstories Avatar
    mjlstories

    A modern dilemma! Did she remember to put a rose between her teeth so at least she could be recognised?

    1. hafong Avatar
      hafong

      I should have thought of that!
      😀

      Lily

  4. Lux G. Avatar
    Lux G.

    Gosh, I haven’t had that experience before. 🙂
    Happy 2016!

    1. hafong Avatar
      hafong

      You can always give it a try. 😊

      Lily

  5. Björn Rudberg (brudberg) Avatar
    Björn Rudberg (brudberg)

    Ah.. Still no real resolution. I wonder if reality will prove it’s Mr Right this time. I guess everyone had a carnation in their buttonhole

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