It’s Friday and time for fiction of 100 words, hosted by Rochelle Wisoff-Fields
I’m a dream girl but not much into fantasy, but I thought it’s time I spread my wings and fly a little. Everything is possible.
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In my dreams, I soared high above the clouds. I touched the wings of the silver bird. I saw the ocean below me. I felt the air and magic around me. Higher and higher I flew.
I heard God whispered in my ears. “You are the child of my universe. Take care of it for me”
Darkness came. The stars twinkled merrily. I reached out and caressed Mr. Moon’s face. He smiled back at me. Tired, I climbed into his welcoming arms, laid my head against his shoulder and slept.
I woke and the sun shone in my eyes.
onethousandandtwo 
great and powerful thanks
Thanks.
Great post. Sorry about the late comment. I had a family emergency.
Hope not a bad emergency. Take care.
Hope everything is O.K. by now.
What a nice dream. I wonder if she took didn’t the Sisyphean task into the daylight to much.. More need to have that dream
Thank you Bjorn! I had to google Sisyphean task. I remember that story, but it is a nice way to learn.
Dear Lily,
Lovely dream. But may I offer some suggestions?
There seems to be some tense confusion…ie past tense and present tense. More immediate would be, “God whispered in my ears…” “caressed” rather than “caress” and “the sun shone in my eyes”.
Your decision. I enjoyed the story.
Shalom,
Rochelle
Thanks for pointing it out, Rochelle. I do have that problem. My partner’s been after me for that for awhile. Sometimes I slip. I will do an edit. 🙂
Lily
Lovely dream.
Thanks Alicia.
Lily
This is sweet.
Thanks!
Lily
What a sweet dream.
Thanks, Anne.
Lily
So powerful need to take some of the words with me .x
Thank you Hannah!
Lilt
Lily, Lovely piece. We should all heed the advice to take care of the universe, at least that part that’s in our power to care for. Well written. 🙂 —Susan
Thank you, Susan.
Lily
Dear Lily, What a pleasant dream – oh to go to sleep each night dreaming of this would be wonderful! Thanks, Nan 🙂
Thanks for reading, Nan!
Lily
This sounds pretty dreamy to me, so long as the sun isn’t too close! Sometimes, we got to reach out the Universe. Great flying, Lily.
Yes, I have to watch that sun! Thanks, Amy.
Lily
a dreamy and lovely story, Lily…love the line about caressing the moon’s face. sometimes we just have to let go and let our imagination run free. 🙂
yes, I have to do it more often, running free.
Lily
Lovely gentle piece of dreamery. I’d like to experience something like that.
Thanks, Patrick.
Lily
I liked the flow of this, Lucy. What a sweet a peaceful scene you created. You could expand it and make a children’s book.
Thank you! A children’s book, that’s a good idea. I have to put on my imagination hat.
Lily